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Wednesday, September 26, 2012

Paper boat - haiku


little chubby hands
set boats sailing on puddle
joy dancing on face

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kites, blue, red, yellow
like sky-sailing paper boats
kissing bashful clouds

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I wish my thoughts could
paper boat across the world
dropping peace parcels

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(image : internet)





10 comments:

  1. Lovely image.
    I share all and every of your wishes in your precious haiku. I love paper boats, kites and, most of all, peace.
    :)

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  2. This is a wonderful set, Jolly! The second one is a unique take on the prompt and wonderfully written! also love your use of paper boat as a verb! Very original!

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  3. I love all three. They all have their special shine. The idea of the kites as sky boats is magnificent.

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  4. Reading Pleasure11:36 pm

    How lovely, especially the last one

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  5. Wow! These are all lovely. The first is so vivid in it's joyful imagery, the second so creative and unique for the prompt and the third so full of peace and hope. You have enriched my day. Thank you.

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  6. Different but gorgeous ... nice haiku.

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  7. Peace parcels --- loved the set :-)

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  8. Anonymous7:39 am

    I like the last one especially - making paper boat a verb works very well.

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  9. I'll have one of those peace parcels, please!


    Paper Boat

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  10. Paper boat in action - love that! And drop me some peace parcel too :)

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