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Saturday, September 29, 2012

Battlefield - haiku


in the war of wills
your smile melts my defense
sweet is surrender

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one more one more chip
until packet lies empty
battle lost again

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battlefield of mind
good wages war with evil
does not always win

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5 comments:

  1. I loved the 1st one ... its so full of sweet love :-)

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  2. I agree with Speck! the first is so romantic!

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  3. I love the romantic first one and identify all to well with the second.

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  4. The first is lovely and so romantic, but the second? Oh that one speaks my language! Thank you for your good wishes.

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  5. Wonderful set. I like the first one very much as I can relate with it. An adorable baby comes to mind.

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