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Sunday, September 23, 2012

Hummingbird - haiku


busy blur of blue
nature’s little acrobat
held aloft by air

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10 comments:

  1. Great description! Like my hummers only yours are blue and mine are green!

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  2. Awesome ... great haiku ... a classical

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  3. I like the alliteration in the first line...

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  4. I agree with Krisjaan. . . classical. . . simple, beautiful

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  5. This is delightful.

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  6. "Nature's little acrobat" Great line!

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  7. You write so well ... I will follow your blog so that I keep getting updates about your post :-)

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  8. I like the little acrobat ~ Very nice description of hummingbird ~

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  9. Yes, indeed, you have described the hummingbird!

    Hummingbird Heaven

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  10. Anonymous4:30 am

    I've never seen a blue hummingbird--they sound lovely (your words are wonderful) :)

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