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Saturday, November 01, 2014

Forget-me-nots - haiku


forget-me-not, please
said Day to Night, in passing
the moon rose, rotund


solitary owl
calls out to a day unseen
forget-me-not, light

between the pages
turning into days and nights
pressed forget-me-nots




waves write parting notes
on the gently yielding sand
forget-me-not, shore

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13 comments:

  1. Anonymous7:38 pm

    forget me not, please
    said softly in the air
    watching the painting from the lens...

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    1. Hmmmm .... very nice!

      waves write notes
      on the gently yielding sand
      forget-me-not, shore

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  2. Anonymous8:58 pm

    super!

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  3. Anonymous5:22 am

    Ret Pe Naam Kabhi Likhte Nahi,
    Ret Par Naam Kabhi Tikte Nahi,
    Hum Toh Pathar Dil Hain,
    Aur Pathar Par Likhe Naam Kabhi Mit Te Nahi

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    1. naam gum jayega
      chehra yeh badal jayega
      meri awaaz hi pehchaan hai
      'gar yaad rahe ....

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  4. Anonymous5:03 pm

    Dur Rahkar Bhi Tumhari kalami Par Hai Nazar Meri
    Magar aap ki awaaz door hogayi
    Sunna chahte hain baar baar Aawaz aap ki
    Magar darta hoon phone gumaane me

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    1. meri kalami hi meri awaaz hai
      meri dil ki baat, meri jazbaat
      agar padh rahe ho toh sun rahe ho ....

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    2. Anonymous10:05 pm

      Asked bird sitting on the far branch ,
      Why are you silent when your chirp is your identity
      Bird said, I changed ; my wing is my identity;
      I fell silent not able to understand the abstract;

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    3. We all connect at various levels
      Soul connection is the deepest one
      It does not require physical contact

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  5. Anonymous4:56 pm

    we rekindled from far,
    it touched our heart, our soul.

    let the fire of our twinship
    fire our soul once more from far

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    1. tera hijr mera naseeb hai
      tera gham meri hayat hai
      mujhe teri doori ka gham ho kyon
      tu kahin bhi ho mere saath hai

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  6. Anonymous6:42 am

    Chalo awaaz se nahi, kalam se bola
    mujhe abhi bhi todi si jaga hai;
    mera gham se apki hayat hoga to,
    chalo hum aur toda gham sahen lenge,
    aur tang nahi karenge;

    khuda hafiz

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  7. Khuda nigehbaan ho tumhara .....

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