the clock’s second hand
chops away bits of life
until none is left
~~~
the river meets death
when it merges with the sea
yet it willing flows
~~~
if death had a voice
it would be melodious
soul suddenly free
~~~
Haiku Heights / Death
Today
4 years ago
Yes, the voice of death must be melodious :-)
ReplyDeleteEach works alone as well as together. My favorite is the river/sea revelation.
ReplyDeleteFree from pain and doom I hope. I rather like the river merging with the sea.
ReplyDeleteThis is a beautifully written haiku... melodious too. :-)
ReplyDeleteEliz
Life. Time. Yes, I know haw the clock takes it away.
ReplyDeleteOH! LOved your #3. Perfect.
ReplyDeletemelodious... there is music in your very words!
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