I felt it the moment
I let you go
bursting my birth sac
and you rushing headlong
to meet that other mother
that steadfast one
singing as you fell
black-slapping
racing each other
like little sperms intent
on meeting those seeds
waiting for your embrace
that sweetness of release
for I, the surrogate
had only held you for her
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(written for the Bentlily prompt - Rain -from the perspective of the clouds)
This is so beautiful ... amazing !!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Green Speck!
DeleteThis is the real you .... at your creative best.
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