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Thursday, January 24, 2013

Dusk - haiku


birds wing in to roost
trees get smudged into greyness
I wait for a knock

the knock never comes
as shadows climb up my walls
azure fades to black

behind closed eyelids
the sun blazes brilliance
dusk a long way off

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4 comments:

  1. Nicely woven story within the series

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  2. "the knock never comes" powerful !!!

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  3. Waiting for something that never comes can be both unnerving and saddening.


    Dusk in the Graveyard

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  4. Beautiful one. Knock...knock ....:)

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