the summer paints dreams
on eyelids shut to the world
sun-baked somnolence
~~~
sleep-walking through life
we arrive at death’s doorstep
begging one more chance
sleep-walking through life
we arrive at death’s doorstep
begging one more chance
~~~
Nice set...I specially like the second one on sleepwalking through life ~
ReplyDeleteNicely done! I love the image of summer painting dreams on eyelids shut to the world. Well done!
ReplyDeleteA real fine set. The last one is very powerful and haunting. Well crafted set
ReplyDeleteVery beautiful haiku set!
ReplyDeleteI love "paints dreams on eyelids". The second one is very moving.
ReplyDeleteThis seems like a beautiful dream !!!
ReplyDeleteSo deeply thoughtful
ReplyDeleteI'm sure that's exactly what I will do at death's door: beg for one more chance!
ReplyDeleteSleep Behind Barred Windows